This (final) episode contains POV paragraphs from Feyi and Mofesola. In keeping with our usual trend, Feyi is speaking in real-time while Mofesola is describing past events. To make it easier to read, I have uploaded Mofe's paragraphs in bold typeface - versus Feyi's paragraphs which are in normal typeface.
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I had never been more surprised in my entire life.
This episode is continued from Episode 1 here, 2 here, 3 here, 4 here, 5 here, 6 here, and 7 here.
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I had never been more surprised in my entire life.
After five years of searching endlessly, of walking round Lagos till I
knew enough to correct street names on Google Maps, of borrowing money from
Feyi to buy countless shirts and ties, I had a job! And not just any job, but
like the MFM Pastor said, it was “isé tó maa tán
ìsé”.
I did not even know where to start from. Should I call my parents
first? Should I call Andrew and ask him to swear that this was not an elaborate
joke? Should I borrow four hundred naira to activate weekly BIS and read the
email for myself? Should I head for the nearest church and shout twenty-four
hallelujahs? Should I dance naked – like I once swore to do?
I could not even scream, dance, or leap for joy. I would have done all
those two or three years before. All I wanted to do was sit there and reflect
on the past five years.
My phone rang again after a few moments, punctuating my reverie.
“This man where are you?” It was Alhaji.
“Ah, Alhaji. I’ve found her.”
“And you couldn’t…”
“Sorry Alhaji. I’ll call you back.” I said, cutting him short and
terminating the call. This was my moment. He had no business sharing it with
me.
I am running; running very fast.
My feet hurt because I left my shoes in that run-down hotel room. I hear a car
honk inside my head. I jump. I fall. I hit my head.
I open my eyes.
I am lying in a hospital bed and
my body aches all over. I feel a throb in my head, my mouth tastes like
sawdust, and I cannot feel my right leg below the knee. Suddenly it all comes
back to me. I was hit by a car and I landed awkwardly on my right leg. I
immediately clamp my eyes shut. I am afraid to look for the fear that I may
have lost the leg. I start to cry, again.
After what seems like an
eternity, I find the strength to open my eyes. I slowly tilt my neck downwards
and stop just short of where I expect my toes to be. After a brief pause, I
clench my fists and look down in a sudden motion. I nearly shout for joy when I
see my toes, all ten of them. I break into a smile, and I swear I can see them
smile back at me.
I try to call a nurse, but the
words will not form. My throat feels sore and my breath is coming out in rasps.
I want water, but there is no one in the room; and I cannot get up from this
bed if my life depends on it.
*****
“Why are you sitting on the ground?” Nurse
Toyin asked from behind me, her tone of voice conveying bewilderment. Before I
could leap to my feet, she added “She’s awake now”, and walked away briskly –
shaking her head as she went. I felt no embarrassment, however; only I knew
what God had done for me.
I dusted off the dirt from the seat of my jeans trousers, then headed
off after her. Walking in silence behind her, I made my way through the
labyrinth of passages and arrived at the door to Feyi’s ward after a few moments.
“You have five minutes. She needs to rest.”
Toyin said, and disappeared into a small room close by. Her concise manner with
words was slightly unnerving, but again – I did not care. God have given me a
job and He had kept my Feyi safe for me. What else could I want?
I put on my poker face and slowly made my
way into the room.
*****
Someone is
coming in. My eyes are closed so I cannot see the person, but the footfalls sound
familiar. The person is placing more of their weight on one leg, so the footfalls
do not sound even. Just as I am about to open my eyes to confirm if it is who I
think it is, I hear his deep and musical voice.
“Baby, are
you awake?”
My heart immediately
begins an elaborate dance, skipping beats at random. A swarm of butterflies
flutters through my stomach. The throbbing in my head ebbs to an imperceptible
low. Only Mofesola can do this to me. I open my eyes slowly and smile at him.
“Sweetheart,
how are you?” He asks. I see the worry in his eyes. I know he is dying to ask
what happened. I wonder how I will explain all this to him. I continue
to smile, my eyes drinking in the dim light of the ward.
“Some
Alhaji called. He told me about two men chasing you. Are you safe here?”
Oh wow. The
fair Alhaji with the broken tooth must have retrieved my phone. Mofesola knows
more than he should already. This is not good.
“I’m fine
Mofe. I ache all over, but the worst is now past.” I finally find the strength
to talk.
I can see
that he is dying to tell me something. His eyes have a glow they have not had
in years.
“Baby, what
is it?” I ask, smiling again.
“Sweetheart,
I got a job. General Electric” he says, suddenly bursting into tears.
I want to
shout, to scream; I want to leap for joy, to throw my arms around his neck. I
want to kiss him senseless, till we are both breathless and he begs me to stop.
But I cannot. At least, not yet; not while my leg hurts so badly.
“Come here.”
I say to him after a while, breaking the unnerving silence. He comes close
enough to lay his head on my heaving chest, and I put my arms around him.
After what
seems like an eternity, he says – “the two men…” Poor Mofesola. He must be
worried sick for my safety. And surely, it does not help that he is clueless
about the situation. I immediately know what I must say to him.
“They were
thieves. They were after my handbag.”
THE END.
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ReplyDeleteWow! Finally. But I want to believe she needn't lie to him. Well, maybe for the time being sha and tell him the truth later. This' 'cuz the truth will eventually turn up due to the kind of person Rotimi is. He may later taunt Mofe with the situation. However, I enjoyed this and I'm grateful for the tags. Well done, bro.
ReplyDeleteWow! Finally. But I want to believe she needn't lie to him. Well, maybe for the time being sha and tell him the truth later. This' 'cuz the truth will eventually turn up due to the kind of person Rotimi is. He may later taunt Mofe with the situation. However, I enjoyed this and I'm grateful for the tags. Well done, bro.
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